Saturday 2 April 2011 | Published in Regional
Avatea primary school students have been letting their imaginations run wild through creative writing like prose and poetry. This week we feature writings from room 5 students of Avatea school.
My Trip to the Moon
with Tom Jones
Yesterday, my ship blasted off to outer space with Tom Jones tagging along.
I was excited and scared at the same time.
It was amazing and unbelievable for me as I watched the earth getting smaller and smaller.
It looked almost like a marble. What a beautiful view.
When we reached outer space I unbuckled out of my seat to find out that I was weightless.
I was floating and bouncing from wall-to-wall. It was so much fun.
Then we landed on the moon. I put on my space suit. The door slowly opened. I slowly walked out with excitement. Tom Jones and I played pass-the-ball on the moon. It was a lot of fun.
But then we realized that it was time to go back home to earth.
So we went back in the ship and blasted home.
Funny, Cool, Good
Who likes reading
Who likes playing
Who likes learning
Who likes music
Who likes sports
Who likes animals and
Who likes doing his work.
Artistic, Cool, Odd
Son of Daniel and Emma
Sibling of Ashton
Who fears death
Who fears the end of the world
Who hates very, very loud noise
Who likes to play soccer with his dad
Who likes to eat cakes, steak and raw fish
Who wishes to run as fast as a cheetah
Who wishes to fly like a bird
Who plans to have a wife
Who plans to have a family
Who plans to have a good & peaceful life
Clever, Lazy, Amazing
Daughter of Louisa & Andy
Sibling of William, Boulard, Lydia, Andria and Sidney
Who hates too much noise
Who needs to learn more
Who needs more listening skills
Who wants to be a pilot
Who wants to have a good education
Who loves playing volleyball
Who loves sport
Who loves spending time with family
Who likes eating ice-cream
Cheeky, Funny, Annoying
Wants to be a billionaire
Wishes to fly
Wishes to be a real singer
Who needs to change her attitude
Who needs to not talk too much
Who needs to improve on her listening
Much loved by her grandparents
Fears losing grandparents
Fears the end of the world
Who loves to sing
Who loves jewellery and
Who loves to eat junk food and drink fizzy drinks
Who wants to be famous